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This what terrible. There's no more movement than a few tweens. Immature story (can't even be called a storyline). I couldn't even stand watching it through..
Did you even put any effort a tall in this?
Seriously, draw more before you start animating. You don't seem to understand the principles of animation yet either.
I'm sorry but i can't find ANYTHING positive to say about this flash.
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Weird that I never commented on this. It's awesome, I've told you on sheezyart already. No point doing it again.
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Awesome style. You should totally keep to that from now on. It's much cleaner than your original one and it also looks more professional.
You pulled of the humor great in this too, wasn't forced or so, good job on that too.
There were a few places where you could have animated a bit better. Instead of tweens in the end you could have used FBF for an example.
In overall, probably the best thing you've ever done. In my opinion.
-Loathsome
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This is like 10 times better than the first one. Better voice act, better animation.
This had like perspective and everything. There were a few places where you over did the "bad animation to make it look fun" thing. But in overall, this was fucking sweet.
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nuff said.
btw. Loathsome loves you. Wait, I said that already.
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It was okay but I couldn't stand watching it all. It was far to slow and didn't really have funny jokes or anything. Everything felt so gloomy.
You could have like added some more humor and more sudden happenings than a few dudes talking. It's like.. a show you watch to fall asleep.
Oh well, it was okay animated though. Get a plus for that.
Author's Response:
I really don't understand everybody complaining about the pacing. It's two dudes talking in a room. When you listen that's all you are hearing, just two people tell stories. I think everyone is expecting like sword battles or something.
I have mentioned at least three times that this is NOT me, it's a director and a producer I like. Yet people still tell me to add more events and change the stories.
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Best flash rpg ever made. Really really good job. I could play this forever!
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Better than waterlollies.
Author's Response:
i know
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It was okay. Needs more things happening. Like sudden things that you get surprised of and maybe laugh or something.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice.
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Animationwise the only thing that was good animated was the tadpole. And humor wise.. was kind of lame. I didn't laugh, I didn't smile. It was more like "heh, k" sort of reaction. You were better in the past, it seems like your humor has gotten worse.
I hope the next thing you do will be better. We all do bad jobs sometimes, can't succeed everytime.
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