Score: 10

"The benchmark that all movies need to strive for"

submission: B

date: April 26, 2008

Very few artists on Newgrounds could make quality movies that also captivates the viewers who watch them. B, from Strawberry Clock, is one of those few flashes who brings that together. This movie, while not in any sense, an actual movie, is more of a well thought out and planned masterpiece that places an unlikely letter, that being the red B, in the middle of the screen, yet slightly off center. It being not exactly in the middle shows that not even the best movie is perfect, and the fact that it is a B instead of an A interperets the idea that even the most quality flashes, while still not perfect, but struggles to find an audience, still may be outclassed by "better" flashes who spent less time and effort than this metaphorical image. While some reviews may classify this flash as one of the most overrated and pointless flashes on Newgrounds, they fail to realise that not everything should be looked at by first glance, but watched again and again to catch hidden meaning and truths hidden in the artwork. Much like Leonardo DaVinci's Mona Lisa, objectives and meanings do not appear the same to two different people. One person may view it as one way as if it is not noteworthy, while others may thinklong and hard just to try to find the metaphor this artwork has in it. Everything in this flash, while not perfect, tells a story about how movies and all other artforms shall be viewed. Thus, I congradulate Strawberry Clock on being the genious who put this piece together and gave it life.

Score: 9

"Oh dude"

submission: Tamra

date: April 26, 2008

I know where yah coming from, totally. I've gone through that too, and it's a really heavy progress. I hope it will turn out good in the end for you! I've done this myself and I hope I can wait as you two do (:

I'm not sympathy voting here either. I liked this really, effort surely was put into this and you did a great job. But I don't think you should use southpark characters. Try something original from your own great mind the next time, I'm sure it will turn out even better if you do!

Anyways, good job and good luck to both of you!

Score: 6

"That was something"

submission: IndianaStick

date: April 26, 2008

I got to admit that you have it in you and so but you should really step out of stick animating. It's kind of limiting you. That monster is what made me realize that you can do better stuff than stick fights.

The quality was good but please, try not to do sticks in the future, I'm pretty sure you can do better!

Score: 7

"Fine animation"

submission: Link's Prize

date: April 25, 2008

The animation was great. The weight and spacing and everything was all fine. But the drawings were kind of sketchy, try to get everything done with one stroke, use penpressure too. Because I assume you're using a pentablet. Good use of the sounds, suited well. It was very short, though.

I'm not a big fan of fan flashes but this one was okay. I'd say it'd deserve it's score better if it was longer and had some kind of story or something.

Score: 7

"Hm good sprite movie"

submission: Neo v Smith

date: April 23, 2008

Good moves, fight scene etc. I like the intro too, the Matrix effect with the text and so on. But of course, it's afterall sprites = not your original work, so I have to cut off 3 points from that.

Score: 5

"Humour but lack of quality"

submission: Burnt Face Man 8

date: April 23, 2008

The humour was okay but the quality didn't follow.
Instead of using tweens upon eachother all the time over and over, try add some fbf. Also use light sources instead of using the same symbol for the characters. I know it's a fast way to do it but it's not the best way.

The humour seem to be lacking the usual quality too. I think BurntFaceMan is getting a bit old now. I'd say that you should come with some new thing. Sallads Fingers for instance can be built on and on because it's completely built on a kind of disturbed way of thinking, I can't put it in a better way.

Although, this wasn't terrible. But I couldn't stand watching it all through, it really didn't suit me good. I had to review though since I liked the other episodes. This is just getting old and you should start something new!

That is all.

Score: 6

"nice story"

submission: Katar II

date: April 18, 2008

It's a really nice story you have there, and long too.

The animation was decent, I think you should do less tween and more fbf though. It looks cheap with just tween. Fbf sure will be more work but it's worth it.

But I can see you put effort into this and of course you get credit for that. Minus 4 for the animation though, you could do better on that part.

Score: 10

"Hello"

submission: Base 17 ::02::

date: April 18, 2008

Hey mate, nice to see you submitted this to NG (: Lovely work as usual.

Score: 5

"Ok animation"

submission: The MAC & PC show

date: April 11, 2008

Lol, I know you from SA.

Also, I hate the weird reviews blabing about PC and Macs and they don't mention shit about the animations. Also they review low because you're saying Mac is better in this. Personally I like PC more.

Anyways, the animation was okay. Nothing amazing. You should work with fbf more and not just tween the characters, it looks so cheap. The concept was kinda funny though.

Score: 10

"Ugh"

submission: You Have To Burn The Rope

date: April 11, 2008

I hate all these idiotic reviews saying "IT'S TOO SHORT" I even saw a review where some dude claimed he killed the boss with the axes, lmao.

Anyway, this was hilarious, I played it before it was on NG though (I think however, it was on your website before it was on NG right?)